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Morning Bell
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Morning Bell |
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sean_krazy Junior Member
since 2002-09-14
Posts 33 |
Morning Bell Smashed last night, With the morning bell I came around. Stumbling across the door with certainty, Only to find the empty bell replaced by The faint echo of outer zephyr. The star glimmered hope beneath grey clouds, The morning bell frustrated me. Inside I ran to Him for answers, My hands clasped like a gem, I closed my eyes and prayed. He gave me Liquor to commemorate good times, Yet I wanted so much more. These restless times through Endless roads, Hear you me, I’m a friendless ghost, Where’s my companion? Through my prayers, With the morning bell I came around. Deserted with tear drops in my eyes, I clutched my palm against Him. Stumbling across the window only to find Hope shattered again. The morning bell echoed, I’m Death to remember, May Angels lead her in… by sean |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
interesting write It matters not how you answer, It matters only that i hear you. |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
This one intrigued me..... Hope to see more from you!!!! Enjoyed!!!! Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Yet I wanted so much more. These restless times through Endless roads, Hear you me, I’m a friendless ghost, Where’s my companion? Induced or not, your tears read real~ I enjoyed the crossing of your thoughts, and the ringing of the bell. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I was attracted by the title .... I love the morning bell. I am glad I came in to read your poem. It is powerful. An outcry for a touch of love. Very well done. Margherita |
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