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P.R.C
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since 2003-01-31
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Hull, England

0 posted 2003-05-11 06:05 PM


You ignored me
You forgot I was there
I was upset but you didnt see
It just gave me the impression that you didnt care
I havent felt like I did today for so long
I felt alone, like I didnt belong

I would rather have been all alone
Then I wouldnt have been ignored, I would just be on my own
At the moment I am really mad
Cause I felt so stupid, I feel so sad

Why was you so mean to her?
You know when things go wrong I cant bear
I hate arguing, I hate all the betrayal, all the pain
I dont like playing little games

It came as no suprise
That your words seemed full of lies
As soon as attention showed up
You went and forgot us
Once he talked to you
We got pushed to the back of the queue

Now shes planning to get you back
But cant we just backtrack
I dont want us all to split
I dont think I could deal with it
It would tear me apart
It would rip out my heart

Cant we just get along?
I wanna feel like I belong
I dont wanna lose you two
Cant we be there for each other, not argue
We are all friends
I thought we would be solid until we all end

But its not gonna be that way
And it hurts me more than I can say
That I might lose my two
Without them I doubt I would see it through
Just end everything
Because you ignored me, made me feel like nothing

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Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2003-05-11 06:32 PM


so sad!
It does hurt when you feel ignored.
Good write though.

passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2003-05-12 04:39 AM


dang, this one hurts...hope things turn out good soon
Justbleu
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3 posted 2003-05-12 12:46 PM


I hope it all works out....
This one aches!!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


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