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Ivy Rose
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0 posted 2003-05-09 11:00 PM



I see the Crescent Moon in you.
I let it rise in your soul,
light your darkened path.
My love waits patiently on bent
knees. Arms outstretched,
allowing my heart to pour into
your loneliness, fill the empty with
the fullness of passion. Passion
tumbles out...and over. Tumbling
over, and over, and over. Like
dewdrops settling on the eager grass,
my love settles into an open circle
and connects the dots of our emotions.

You paint a rainbow
over your soul and say, "Never again.
Never again will I be empty,
desolate, alone; for I am filled
with the beauty of your deep,
chocolate eyes, your ruby-red
lips of consuming passion."

Under the Crescent Moon, I am awakened
to the slice of light that encircles
my heart; and I let it light
the pathway to your soul...with my love.

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1 posted 2003-05-09 11:06 PM


"Under the Crescent Moon, I am awakened
to the slice of light that encircles
my heart; and I let it light
the pathway to your soul...with my love."


Oh my...this is wonderful..so beautiful!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2003-05-09 11:11 PM




(smiles) Oh Ivy, this is beautiful, sweet friend, in love we all have a piece of mind and heart shared between one another and may that crescent always mold deep into your heart and cancel out the darkness! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet fridnd, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ivy, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

Magnus
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3 posted 2003-05-10 01:33 AM


Goodness Ivy,  this is a treasure.  Someone
is very very lucky...

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4 posted 2003-05-10 07:44 AM


....and all it takes, most times, is a little light along the pathway. Well done.

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5 posted 2003-05-10 10:18 AM


IvyRose~
I so enjoy a *word-gifted treasure* from you~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Startime55
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6 posted 2003-05-10 01:24 PM


A romantically beautiful love poem that leaves one breathless with the vision of it....I love it...

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