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Walk with me
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Walk with me |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
Walk with me, beside this river Lets laugh and talk, and fill this day Not with closeness, marked by distance With love that time let drift away Walk with me, beside this ocean Lets share again, the simple things Have not forgot, why I love you So lets forget, the empty things Walk with me, beside this memory Lets find again, a place to start I forget, sometimes its my fault But never have you left my heart |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sounds like a great place to be |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
What a beautiful and heartfelt walk..... Those are the best and most cherished of all!!! Enjoyed!!!! I'm such a sucker for the mushy stuff!!!! Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Gina Culliney Member
since 2003-03-08
Posts 170 |
a beautiful tribute to what was lost and hopefully will be found once again. Eloquently penned, made me think sadly about Poe's beloved Lenore. |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
A compliment to poe! very nice my mirror. thank you for saying I dream in numbers,nice for you to call my number. Jason |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
lovely bit of writing here..is it ok for a guy to say lovely to another guy? I mean it in a manly way..ok I am nuts.. |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
Jason,A very nice poem so beautiful Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become |
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Lost_Soul Junior Member
since 2003-04-17
Posts 37California, United States |
This is great.  |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
God Jason: this is absolutely beautiful! Walk with me . . . yes very nice indeed xxoo |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
Thanks for the read and comments friends, lol @ Raph.Decided to try a mushy one on for size, was suprised it fit  Jason |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
*sigh* a gentle, beautiful request that shows the depth of your love....A wonderful read... |
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FlyingCloud Member
since 2003-04-28
Posts 151A little place inside my head |
 Summarized in one word: Cute. +Genuine poetry can communicate before it is understood.+ |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
Walk with me, beside this ocean Lets share again, the simple things Have not forgot, why I love you So lets forget, the empty things in front of the ocean, the truth in front of you......no better place to love |
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El_Campeador Senior Member
since 2003-01-29
Posts 761Ohio, USA |
"Walk with me, beside this memory Lets find again, a place to start I forget, sometimes its my fault But never have you left my heart" Excellent! I loved this! “We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson |
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