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Thomas119gold
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since 2002-06-03
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0 posted 2003-05-09 02:15 PM



Passion spills
like an evening rain
filling every nook and cranny
causing in each a subtle change

Unknown results
from this future venture
yet the pull is strong
tugging me along

words within words mean
so much as I avoid your touch
cool as the water
that falls from the sky

My wants are far from my needs
the volume starts to exceed the capacity
flooding everything close to me
I am struggling not to drown our love

Save me for
I cannot save us
flow into me
with your passionate touch

let us blend into one
and allow the return
of the setting sun
ceasing the evening rain

let us
be us
once again



© Copyright 2003 Thomas Goldsworthy - All Rights Reserved
garysgirl
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1 posted 2003-05-09 02:43 PM


Thomas, this one has a lot of hurt in it.
Even though it is sad, though, it is beautiful, too.
Thanks for sharing it.
Hugs,
Ethel

BlueEyes
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since 2002-08-30
Posts 152
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2 posted 2003-05-09 03:55 PM


let us blend into one
and allow the return
of the setting sun
ceasing the evening rain

let us
be us
once again


This was amazing.. I am literally speachless.

BlueEyes

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
3 posted 2003-05-09 06:23 PM


Thomas:

absolutley lovely
this is amazing

let us
be us
once again

hope so
xxoo

passing shadows
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4 posted 2003-05-09 07:02 PM


this tears me up
Thomas119gold
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Biloxi, MS (city by the sea)
5 posted 2003-05-10 10:42 AM


Please no crying

Positive energy


vandana
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6 posted 2003-05-10 05:10 PM


enjoyed
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