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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-05-09 12:47 PM

Fate’s Silhouette

I wish
that fate
would have
let me
love you

a little more

but time
brought it’s salt
to wash
away the shore
I backed away
in silence
and faced
to the way
things set
catching one
last reflection
of the sun
and moon
in silhouette

j-oh-E
Member

since 2003-05-01

Posts 59
Texas, USA

1 posted 2003-05-09 12:51 PM

I think of you writing this poem at the crossroads of your life. It's at this point when you realize how much, or how little, fate means as face the trial and tribulations of a life that's far from perfect. I love it!

S Arthur Grey
Senior Member

since 2001-03-19

Posts 719
woven by a poet's loom

2 posted 2003-05-09 12:51 PM

Well, you just keep doing it!
Love the way you write!

SAG

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2003-05-09 01:35 PM

yeah...keep touching me

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

4 posted 2003-05-09 10:21 PM

Every time I think your writing is as good as it can get, you show us

a little more

Nice....very nice.

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Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2003-05-09 11:34 PM

(big hugggsssssss) Oh Helen, fate can do such cruel things to us, and God has a reason for everything I'm sure but I just wish fate had less of a pitch reflection to it! (sad sigh) This is poignant and straight-through, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

6 posted 2003-05-12 12:26 PM

you can look behind the veil so well. . . makes me wonder. . .

great work helen. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Janette

Member Elite

since 2001-07-20

Posts 2843
Chicagoland for now

7 posted 2003-05-12 01:44 PM

I can sooooooooo relate to ALL of your writing here lately.

Please know you are not alone.

And I pray that eventually you will realize that "he" is not worth all of your pain and that "he" will soon fade into just a memory to be left on stained pages of white.

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