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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
We could dissolve. At this moment we could surrender to the fullness of one another. I could be your breath. You could pull me to you...drawing me through to the closeness of your being. You could let me go...to only draw me fresh as another breath of life. We could dissolve. You could flow through my veins - My heart could beat your name to every fiber of existence. We could dissolve. At this very moment. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
[Note to self: would you PLEASE not read Ericc until you are in a very PRIVATE place...dang it, don't you know you melt?] Ahem. Ericc, this is lovely! |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
SWOON... TD |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
beautiful! |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ericc...It wasn't too long ago that I felt this very way...you expressed it beautifully! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I too remember this feeling...beautiful!! ~Smiles & Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Etain Member
since 2003-02-22
Posts 92The moon... |
Wow!, this is so sensual and beautiful. Hugs Eric, I liked it as all yours as all I have read from before, Etain. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Eicc - hmmmm - so very fluid . . . this is lovely xxoo |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Ericc, I tried to respond earlier to this lovely piece, but I lost the connection...story of my life...losing connections, internet or otherwise. LOL I have a friend to whom I send your poetry. I always tease him, asking if he wants to melt with me. Now I think I will ask him if, "We can dissolve." Yes, I do believe that is my new line. Thanks. I agree with Sunshine: "One must be alone to read Ericc." You know I love your writing, don't you? -Patricia |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) And the way I see it, it would be absurd for her not to accept your invitation! (smiles) This is beautiful and softly romantic, sweet friend, love the embers of your words, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome....completely awesome! |
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Sonic Junior Member
since 2003-05-06
Posts 13Victoria, Australia |
Looks like I found me a fellow hopeless romantic. (I hope) Great work. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
A beautiful moment, beautifully presented. This is how it should be, and how it is when we're incredibly lucky. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Now that is what I call being close! Wondrously sensuous writing which draws the reader in...  Warm hugs, EA |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ericc Never quite dissolved but am in the process. LOL, enjoyed. |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Eric I really enjoy your style of writing... Fantastic piece! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
hmmmmm I am much better off than Karilea .... she happened to read you in the morning ..... while I happen to read you at exactly 00.37 am and with the beautiful emotions your wondrous poem gives me I am going to sleep .... to dream ..... to dissolve .... We could ... Done! You are a miracle. Love, Margherita  |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Eric, this is so beautiful. And, you know that I feel it now....with my Love, of course. Hugs, Ethel |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice  |
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