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bklynboy
Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660
florida

0 posted 2003-05-07 04:37 AM


colorful petals
trickle down,

seasons revolve
and fill branches,

love comes
on the coattails
of disappointment,

i long to find another
to build these dreams

a sly grin
a little twinkle
ever knowing

i long to find another
to replace the loneliness

BRING BACK THE "INKED ONE"!

[This message has been edited by bklynboy (05-07-2003 04:38 AM).]

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Justbleu
Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
1 posted 2003-05-07 10:19 AM


Enjoyed!!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
2 posted 2003-05-07 12:06 PM


BB:

me too
Im with you on this one
nice job
all of it
xxoo

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
3 posted 2003-05-07 12:12 PM


love comes
on the coattails
of disappointment

That's a nice image...
enjoy the change of season bklynboy.

It's going to be a long hot summer
if she doesn't get back here soon
with her cool fountain of ink.

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