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Tunnels |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia 
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Alone Within my mind Its dark in here In these tunnels Roaming amongst my thoughts Searching For a trace I'm lost, confused Wandering through my cell Opening forgotten doors Scared I find a memory I hoped would be erased How do I do it ? Keep you within me Hating Myself Memories Of you and I Blanketing my thoughts Locking all inside my head Forbidding Me back to drift To that time When pain overcame Myself engulfed |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
Forbidding Me back to drift To that time When pain overcame Myself engulfed very nice lines tells it very well It matters not how you answer, It matters only that i hear you. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh Julie, this is very heartfelt, sweet friend, I don't like to stay down in the tunnels too long as they always seem to go on and on and it helps to stick the head out to the surface and look for clues up above! (big hugggsssssss) This is well-written, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I wanted to quote a line I enjoyed, but couldn't separate your poem. It had a special meaning to me. M |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
In the tunnels there is a blackness which reflects back upon us as an echo of the searching soul. This piece is a wonderful statement of feelings which are powerful but not always wonderful. Well done. *smile* |
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