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I'll Always Remember
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I'll Always Remember |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050
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I’ll Always Remember How long has it been since my heart was this full? How long does it take to wake up someone’s soul? To again realize who’s important to you To bring back old memories so long overdue How happy I was to again see you smile And laughing out loud like you did as a child To feel your embrace as we hugged and we kissed Feelings forgotten how much I had missed Fate doesn’t pause until your mind is made Borrowed time’s something you cannot repay Without some courage your chances are lost Rejection’s high price carries too steep a cost How lucky we are when we get to renew Kinship in need of a patch or some glue Rekindling old friendships of which we once knew And starting some others altogether anew I want you to know how proud of you I am That I really love you as much as one can I only now hope that you now realize How much I have missed you how hard I will try To always remember the time that we spent How happy we were how fast the time went Even for a moment how great it did feel That something so nice was no dream, it was real [This message has been edited by Richy (05-07-2003 05:11 AM).] |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Richy, This is lovely...wow, wait 'til she hears this one. Lovin' your stuff, my friend. Enjoy that romantic verse...I can't seem to get enough these days!!! -Patricia |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Thanks Patricia, you have been so supportive to me... I really appreciate it! You to James... thanks so much for taking the time... Richy |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Even for a moment how great it did feel That something so nice was no dream, it was real Richy this is a lovely and wonderful write!!!! Very nice poetry!!!! Enjoyed!!! I know that feeling well!!! Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ohhh myyy, I love the way you write! This one is a keeper...oooh yessss! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Richy, from one transplanted CA'n to another... enjoyed! Thank you! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Richy: is nice to see you take comfort in what you once had with this level of heart . . . so true nice writing xxoo |
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quatro Member
since 2003-04-29
Posts 392Galveston, Texas |
Richy, What a wonderful poet your are! I am a fan of already. quatro |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Thank you Bridgette so much for reading and the great reply... Nancy, your always just so "Enchanting!!!" Thank You Sunshine! You used to live in the "Big Orange" huh? No wonder your name is Sunshine... littlewing, your comments are always so nice, and appreciated... Thank You!! Naomi, I am a fan of yours as well... Thanks so much for your kind response!! [This message has been edited by Richy (05-08-2003 06:19 AM).] |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Richy~ Greatly enjoyed this read. Of course the title has me singing an old one ...~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Richy, This is wonderful and though you may have meant it in a romantic sense, according to your comments, it can be applied and does touch my heart in that I can visualize other kinds of love relationships with it.... I love it! Thank you, Hugs, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Thank You Marge! Is there a song you know of with the same title? Huglets Back Marge! Thank You Pat! Actually I wrote this poem after a trip to see my family who all live in another state... I hadn’t seen them in many years... And so, you are right, it can definitely be meant for all types of loved ones... Thanks again Pat and Marge for your nice replies! Richy |
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