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a moment (promise #1 -- you're it now)
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a moment (promise #1 -- you're it now) |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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promises remembered finding a quiet moment among the loudness, I fill the room with it taking your hand, I make the same promise that you have made to me the notes begin to envelop the quiet reminding the heart that as long as there are days there will always be music ----------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sven, I agree with you, well done, enjoyed. |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Lovely loving, you. Sven Pen strikes again. I love it.   You could hurt me with your bare hands. You could hurt me using the sharp edge of what you say. JEWEL |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Sven, it's been too long. Promises are not easy, are they? |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Hey Sven...James |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
This is sweetly done, Sven! Good to read your words! Cor |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very nicely written Sven...much enjoyed. Don't stay away so long. ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh Sven, it is wonderful to see you again, sweet friend, yes, there are days and they will go on as the youth will hold the music dear that complements them well! (big hugggssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sven, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
... and the music plays on ... love those play lists! Great to read you ... again ... dear friend! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
John: keep the music playing my friend as it does here . . . lovely xxoo |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Sven - and the sweetest of music shall enter your heart... BC |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
the notes begin to envelop the quiet reminding the heart beautiful lines and what a delightful concept! |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
wow... now what you have is stunned silence in appreciation of such a beautiful work... Regards Sir Sven, Sudhir |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
promises remembered...yes |
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Sybil Member
since 2002-09-12
Posts 73Midwest |
Music is a passion that sometimes mixes well with words. Other times, only the music need be. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed  |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
as long as there are days there will always be music Beautifully said Sven! Maree |
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Cheryl Flemming Member
since 2000-09-14
Posts 102 |
Beautifully expressed! |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
I'm stunned into silent admiration. Although the music soars in my heart. Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
thank you all so much my friends. . . it's good to see you all again. . . and, it's good to write again. . . I've missed it. . . -------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Lost_Soul Junior Member
since 2003-04-17
Posts 37California, United States |
I really liked this. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
This is such beautiful music, Sven. |
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