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ptwils165
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0 posted 2003-05-06 07:35 AM


A moment passing by our doors,
Surprising sense and heartbeat scores
Lets me long for hours more
Of whispering the sun.

I planned to pass as every time
a smile if love has found a rhyme,
as sure as tower bells hit chime
I know my heart is won

Stop a moment, take a chance
Feel my life turn with your glance
Hear a word to move romance
Set it into flight

These dreamlike thoughts took over mind
I now step forward into line
Hear you answer, real this time,
And far above my sights

Why I never spoke to you,
I know, for how I love -
To keep my heart from knowing who
Might break it from above

The time drifts by, so unreal
I never want this wound to heal
Now we know we can conceal
Any word but love.

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Nan
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1 posted 2003-05-07 07:30 AM


How true - We just can't hide our feelings when there's love involved - It's all encompassing, isn't it?... Nicely said, Pete..
Elan
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2 posted 2003-05-07 10:16 AM



Enjoyed this write
very much.

Thank you.

Earth Angel
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3 posted 2003-05-07 10:22 AM


A beautiful write with depth of emotion.

Warm hugs,
EA

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4 posted 2003-05-07 12:31 PM




Pete,

Beautiful and deep.


Enjoyed,

Hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

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5 posted 2003-05-07 12:37 PM


Beautiful said!

Charisma

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6 posted 2003-05-07 01:54 PM


Charming.
Very well placed, and very well said. TD

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