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Unexpected Graces |
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MikeFessel Member
since 2003-04-19
Posts 321Brooklyn, NYC, USA |
Held out my hand instead she took my heart. Offered her advice, instead she took my pain. Flashed her a smile, she covered me in laughs. Paid her a compliment, she showered me with kindness. Tried to run away, she chased me down again. I told her I wanted to die, she made me want to live. Said Hi I'm a stranger, she turned me into her friend. By Michael J Fessel One more poem about my Angel  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
This world could use a few more million angels like this...James |
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MikeFessel Member
since 2003-04-19
Posts 321Brooklyn, NYC, USA |
JamesMichael, Yes I am so lucky sigh... Thanks for your reply! Mike |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Smiling... This is so rare, and so true of love that is based in friendship. Happy for your wealth. TD |
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MikeFessel Member
since 2003-04-19
Posts 321Brooklyn, NYC, USA |
ThisDiamond, Thank you. I am so very lucky I agree! Mike |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
She sounds like a true keeper....be good to her! I enjoyed this greatly, made me smile |
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MikeFessel Member
since 2003-04-19
Posts 321Brooklyn, NYC, USA |
Janette, You better believe I shall do all that I can to be good to her. She deserves it and much more! Mike |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
What an angel she must be. You are blessed, Mike. I love it when you write like this...makes me feel all is right in your world. Beautiful, my friend. -Patricia |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Mike~ Sooooooooooo refreshingly you share these loving thoughts~  *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Awww I really liked Tara |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
BRAVO!!!!BRAVO!!!This is absolutely excellent....You have won a true friend in her....I LOVE IT!!! |
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MikeFessel Member
since 2003-04-19
Posts 321Brooklyn, NYC, USA |
Patricia, Oh thank you so much!!! Oh you don't know how good I feel right now! If you think you've seen me low, you should see me when I am up high! Oh not only is my Angel doing better [thank you!], but I have made an instant connection with someone, like never before in my life, and she's so sweet, and wonderful and a million other things and I have been spending every moment thinking about her, talking to her or dare I say it, dreaming about her! Oh its only been a few days so it can't be love, but its definately more than a crush.[And I mean every moment not thinking, talking to, or dreaming about my Angel-for no one can ever replace the feelings I have for her inside my heart] Oh I haven't given you enough smilies! Here's one and here's one and here's another Always so great to hear from you Patricia, you'd better not be a stranger!  |
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MikeFessel Member
since 2003-04-19
Posts 321Brooklyn, NYC, USA |
Marge Tindal, Oh big huglets for you too! I am so glad you like it. But it doesn't do her justice I am afraid. Still she loved it anyway, though somehow she doesn't see herself as any of this. But of course she is and more, and that she doesn't see it is part of what makes her so great! Oh that all may have an Angel for a friend as wonderful as her Ahh Marge, I'm so happy to hear from you again. I so enjoy catching a glimpse of that little deer, for than I know that you are gracing my world with your presence again Mike |
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MikeFessel Member
since 2003-04-19
Posts 321Brooklyn, NYC, USA |
rosepetals25, Oh thank you Tara, you don't know how happy it makes me that you enjoyed this Mike |
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MikeFessel Member
since 2003-04-19
Posts 321Brooklyn, NYC, USA |
Startime55 Oh how I know it! And I shall never let my friendship for her fade, everyday I plan to let her know just how special she is to me! Mike [This message has been edited by MikeFessel (05-08-2003 04:41 AM).] |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Ah, this is so uplifting, dear Mike. And very beautifully written. May your passionate heart bloom in this special love-friendship with your Angel. Love, Margherita |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
so beautifully romantic! |
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MikeFessel Member
since 2003-04-19
Posts 321Brooklyn, NYC, USA |
Margherita, O thank you I am in heaven right now Mike |
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MikeFessel Member
since 2003-04-19
Posts 321Brooklyn, NYC, USA |
passing shadows, Ha ha thankyou, why can't a friendship have a romantic flavor Mike |
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