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RSWells
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0 posted 2003-05-06 03:41 AM



             "Audi Partem Alteram"
                           -St. Augustine c 400

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Congress defines that certain intercourse
Shall without hindrance breath as free as air
Make no mistake in internet discourse
No tyrant long can stand beneath truth's glare
Law, while shield for some is sword for others
Abridging liberties with every swipe
The well heeled haves forever seek to smother
Freedom when used by have-nots they think it tripe
Of all the laws formed by enlightened framers
Speech was the foremost fundamental right
Or would you now believe it needs disclaimers
Of who may sing its day and who to silent night?
The threat now undermines your palladium*
Press on, a choir's voice will ne'er be overcome

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"If all mankind minus one, were of one opinion,
and only one person were of the contrary opinion,
mankind would be no more justified in silencing
that one person, than he, if he had the power,
would be in silencing mankind"
                   -John Stuart Mill 1859

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Audi Partem Alteram = hear the other side
*Palladium = A statue of Pallus Athene, esp. one on the citadel of Troy on which the safety of the city was supposed to depend.....anything believed to provide protection.

"Nils Desperandum" Wells Family Motto

© Copyright 2003 Richard S. Wells jr. - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2003-05-06 06:26 AM



Read this through several times...

can only come to one conclusion.

I'm so glad you came to PiP...

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2 posted 2003-05-06 07:46 AM


have to agree with Sunshine..

good stuff RS

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3 posted 2003-05-06 07:50 AM


Richard, this is wonderful. I'm so glad that you
are here, too. Do you know what? I'll bet if you were a history teacher, more students would love history class. You know how to make the learning process enjoyable.
Thank you, Sir Richard.  
Hugs,  
Ethel

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4 posted 2003-05-06 05:45 PM


There are many countries where if you speak your mind you will have your head cut off or spend a life in prison...
Yet it always troubles me when a man that has no fear of these actions takes his freedom of speech not to say or do a good turn for mankind but to reveal how big of a fool he can be...would they also speak their mind if they feared retribution...for example how many men would come face to face with Mike Tyson and tell him he was uncivilized and ugly...not me...yet I do have that freedom of speech...James

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5 posted 2003-05-06 08:32 PM


I really appreciated the work you put into this one Richard and the end result was as usual excellent.  As for freedom of speech, do we all really use it to the fullest extent?  I don't really think so as there are too many other contributing factors that have reperecussions on free speech.  This poem sure makes you ponder though.

                 

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6 posted 2003-05-07 12:46 PM


...May I humbly acknowledge your genius and intrepid individuality and say that your work continuously serves as inspiration to the possibilities of linguistic expression?  (and I'm not flattering, either.)

-MVS

You CAN make a difference:
http://educate-yourself.org/

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7 posted 2003-05-07 04:25 PM


Richard, I will keep this piece and have my teenager read it for a homeschooling assignment (US Constitution course)this year.
It is outstanding, and so timely.
Thank you so much. Kacy

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8 posted 2003-05-07 07:33 PM


RSWells
Wonderful piece of writing, but we both know the more you dig the more involved it gets. But I do admire your skills.

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9 posted 2003-05-07 07:37 PM


Richard...So well done!  
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10 posted 2003-05-07 08:14 PM


I have to agree with what everyone else has said... Well done, I enjoyed

Tara

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11 posted 2003-05-08 12:28 PM


bravo Sir. . . well done. . .

I shall keep this in my library for study, as should anyone who wishes to further their knowledge of this unique craft we call poetry. . .

superb. . .

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12 posted 2003-05-08 02:08 PM


Interesting form you have here, Sir.

I'll consider this poem an education and excercise of my thoughts.
enjoyed your work as always

You could hurt me with your bare hands. You could hurt me using the sharp edge of what you say. JEWEL

RSWells
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13 posted 2003-05-08 09:02 PM




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The bludgeon of patriotism musn't be wield to stifle voices of dissent. It was tried before and after four long years resulted in not one conviction, not even for the contempt charges on those that were legally embracing the 5th amendment. People either forget or don't know that it wasn't just unsympathetic rich hollywood types, screen writers and authors who were blacklisted. Many average Joes at GE, Westinghouse Electric and Bethlehem Steel were dismissed for merely being summoned before McCarthy and Cohn (seen on left a jewish homosexual who attacked both Jews and homosexuals)
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I'm overwhelmed at the warm reception this post got and would like to thank you all for not only the read but for the best little gathering of responses I think I've gotten here.

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