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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-05-05 07:06 PM

I Will Cry For You

I will
cry for you
tears you
can not weep
for the hurt
and the nothingness
for dreams
you dropped
along the way
and touches
you need
for the hole
to mend
for the salt
to stop
rough edges melt
to smooth
so sleep
will be a friend
for I can do
nothing more
than cry for you

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2003-05-05 07:29 PM

so sleep
will be a friend

I am still waiting for that to happen

nicely done, as always
M

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

2 posted 2003-05-05 07:55 PM

You hit things right on the mark everytime Helen !! Enjoyed. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....

-Emily Dickinson

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

3 posted 2003-05-05 08:09 PM

Oh Helen...now you've gone and made me all teary eyed! I feel this and am saving it~

Hugs,
Melissa~

Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world!

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

4 posted 2003-05-05 11:05 PM

tears you
can not weep
for the hurt
and the nothingness
for dreams
you dropped
along the way

achingly beautiful, better words escape me

icebox
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

5 posted 2003-05-06 12:31 PM

Very cleanly done. Nothing wasted; nothing spared. Thank you for sharing this.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2003-05-06 03:51 AM

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

7 posted 2003-05-07 01:10 AM

for the salt
to stop
rough edges melt
to smooth
so sleep
will be a friend

Things like this make me want to go out and howl at the moon -- yes, to express, but mainly just to make it official about men.

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Nan

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

8 posted 2003-05-07 08:09 AM

Your tears will make a difference... I do believe...

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

9 posted 2003-05-07 08:13 AM

heartfelt penned, got me teary too

((hugs))
Charisma

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