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CountryGal
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since 2003-03-09
Posts 24
Missouri, USA

0 posted 2003-05-05 07:24 AM


Someday

There's a pain in my heart
Because we are so apart
How I wish I could be there
Or that you could be here

I know that the time isn't right so I will wait patiently
Because I know that one day we will share our feelings freely
I'm sitting idly by trying to find ways to pass the time
Until the time that you will finally be mine

So we can show our love for each other
Without worring about others
That will be a great day
Just us together all the way

Maybe tomorrow, next week, next month or next year
We'll never know when the time is right for us to be near
But I will wait for that day to come
That day when I can call being with you home

I hope the time will not haste
For I don't want to waste
Waste another year apart
For you are so much in my heart

© Copyright 2003 Tara - All Rights Reserved
MikeFessel
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since 2003-04-19
Posts 321
Brooklyn, NYC, USA
1 posted 2003-05-05 08:28 AM


CountryGal,
This is a great poem. I interpreted this as a love poem to a future love not yet met. am I correct here? Beautiful poem!

   Mike

  

Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
2 posted 2003-05-05 11:26 AM


Either that or you know him and for some reason you aren't together....
I hope it's the former....
Nice poem!!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


CountryGal
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since 2003-03-09
Posts 24
Missouri, USA
3 posted 2003-05-05 10:42 PM


Well this is about a friend that I want to be more to. So I know him but can't be more right now.
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