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I Am A Shadow Dancer
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I Am A Shadow Dancer |
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Zaynab Member
since 2003-05-04
Posts 59Kuwait |
I Am A Shadow Dancer I am a shadow dancer A block of life tossed aside Forgotten within the collective minds of those whose social boundaries reach invisible peaks My achievements My successes My accomplishments They know none of these My failures they mock My losses are their wins For every step I fall they climb another They don't understand my desperation To be one of them Of the gang Not to be pushed aside for my own gifts To move out of the shadows Into the light Kill me tonight and I will love again Leave me to live and I live in pain Leave me no love and I live in vain Kill me tonight and kill the pain [This message has been edited by Zaynab (05-04-2003 11:44 AM).] |
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Zaynab Member
since 2003-05-04
Posts 59Kuwait |
Corrections My losses are their wins For every step I fall they climb another Sorry about the typos, my ghost Fred was having fun. Kill me tonight and I will love again |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Welcome To Passions!!!!! Hope you like it here..... Good write!!!! Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Zaynab Member
since 2003-05-04
Posts 59Kuwait |
Thankyou for the welcome! Glad you enjoyed it, hope to post some more soon. Zaynab Kill me tonight and I will love again |
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wings of the moon Member
since 2003-03-27
Posts 323Pink bubblegum land |
Hi!! A beautiful write Zaynab  welcome on pip dear friend  love, Claire xxxx "more than yesterday, less than tomorrow, i love you" |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Welcome to Passions in Poetry, Zaynab - This is a wonderful poetic home where I'm sure you'll find a comfortable spot...  Check your email for a special greeting..  |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Welcome to Passions...it is going to be a pleasure to read more of your work....this one is very heartfelt...Great write... |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
WONDERFUL! your shadow dances in the light here at this passionate poetic site  WELCOME! |
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Zaynab Member
since 2003-05-04
Posts 59Kuwait |
Thankyou all for your lovely welcomes. Glad you enjoyed the poem. Zaynab ps. BOO Claire! I'll bet this was a surprise! xxxx Kill me tonight and I will love again |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
tell Fred he can use the edit function on top to fix the typo in the post (like I just did to fix a typo in this reply)  (I came back to click this book submission) [This message has been edited by Midnitesun (05-04-2003 11:26 AM).] |
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Zaynab Member
since 2003-05-04
Posts 59Kuwait |
Thanks for the tip. I've fixed the typos but now I've got a post I don't need! I don't suppose there's any way of deleting it is there? or is it only the administrator people that can do that? I've sent Fred to bed, but I can hear him pounding away at the floor... Oh my head! Thanks again Zaynab Kill me tonight and I will love again |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
ROTFL at what you did to Fred. The moderators can help you with deletions. Just email one of them, they are listed at the top of the page. |
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Zaynab Member
since 2003-05-04
Posts 59Kuwait |
ROTFL? Kill me tonight and I will love again |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
ROTFL=Roll on the floor laughing LOL=laughing out loud |
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Zaynab Member
since 2003-05-04
Posts 59Kuwait |
that explains it! ta very much :-) Kill me tonight and I will love again |
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