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brian sites
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0 posted 2003-05-03 12:02 PM



the ocean
is a private
belief

it asks for you
alone

    hollows you
like a conch

        listening
to the vastness

reflected

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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2003-05-03 12:11 PM


it ebbs
your tide

           then rips away

stranded,

alone,

seaweed,
                                  floating

serenity blaze
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2 posted 2003-05-03 12:15 PM


Zenmaster poet viking...

I know a certain moth who is going to love these--maybe even as much as I do.

brian sites
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3 posted 2003-05-03 12:27 PM



Sunkissed
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4 posted 2003-05-04 07:20 AM


Awesome write, Brian.

Enjoyed.

Sunkissed.

Janet Marie
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5 posted 2003-05-04 08:25 PM


the ocean
is a private
belief

========================

yesssssssss........

exactly.

blue waved religion.

(love your succinctity and impact of imagery)
very cool series here...
another one for my collection and off to see the next.

You're the best I've ever felt ...
it's so wrong not to be with you.
It's getting harder to stay away,
it stops my heart just to be with you.

SH

wranx
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Moved from a shack to a barn
6 posted 2003-05-05 09:29 PM


And all who commune, will see her in a differing light
littlewing
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7 posted 2003-05-05 11:30 PM


reminds me of a long time ago myself . . .

love this story bri . . .

xxoo

Sunshine
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8 posted 2003-05-06 10:37 AM



Library

nakdthoughts
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9 posted 2003-05-06 12:16 PM


enjoying~~

M

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