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sister3of4
Junior Member
since 2003-04-11
Posts 16
Northumberland, England

0 posted 2003-05-02 04:24 PM



You were the sun
In my every day,
You were the moon
In my darkest night.

You were the joy
In my sadness,
You were my candle
You brought the light.

You were the rapture
In my heaven,
You were my breath
You gave me flight.

You were the fire
In my belly,
You were my beacon
You set me alight.

You were the rhapsody
In my singing,
You were radiant
You dazzled my sight.

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QjQ
Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756
U.S.A.
1 posted 2003-05-02 04:33 PM


You were the rhapsody
In my singing,
You were radiant
You dazzled my sight.


liked  these lines

It matters not how you answer, It matters only that i hear you.

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
2 posted 2003-05-03 05:05 PM


You sound like me, the beacon of light becomes you.

Much enjoyed~

sister3of4
Junior Member
since 2003-04-11
Posts 16
Northumberland, England
3 posted 2003-05-05 04:01 PM


Glad you liked it. Thanks for your replies.
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