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Spring again

Mystic Mystron
Member

since 2002-02-15

Posts 69
North York .Ontario

0 posted 2003-04-20 12:31 PM

You can almost see it happening
The greys and browns giving way
The browns slowly turning
The grey slowly disappearing
Green emerging from the browns and reds
Brightening and growing
Covering the grey till none is seen
It is definitely spring again.

You are a good poet as soon as you try to reach others with your words.
You are a great poet when those same words touch your heart first.

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

1 posted 2003-04-20 09:03 PM

yes Yes the ole spring time is here, with the winter on its way out!

very nice write

SPIRIT
Senior Member

since 2002-12-29

Posts 1745
California Desert

2 posted 2003-04-25 07:32 PM

Nice!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2003-04-29 04:29 AM

a wonderful season it is!

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2003-04-29 09:09 AM

It sure is here Wilfred!
One for the book!
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

GG
Member Elite

since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

5 posted 2003-06-02 08:55 AM

Sounds more like the changing of a mind to me...
from emptiness to joy!
Ah beautiful!

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
(blink, breathe, stand, fight)

pjtalty
Member

since 2002-07-17

Posts 111
W.A., Australia

6 posted 2003-06-04 10:04 AM

A joyful and colourful greeting to Spring. I always admire a poem that can capture the reader's feelings, thoughts and imaginations with the kind of brevity lauded by Ralph Waldo Emerson in his preface to *Parnassus*: " poetry teaches the enormous force of a few words, and, in proportion to the inspiration, checks loquacity." Your poem certainly qualifies!

Patrick Talty

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