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dhicks03 Member
since 2002-12-26
Posts 267Missouri,USA |
Blues player...play for me Bend those strings Un-spoken words That only chosen Knowing ones Can hear...feel me bleed Poet...write for me Let the dead weight of heartache Pour out onto the paper As your sorrows Of forgotten tomorrow's Pours into ink...feel me bleed Singer...sing for me Look life and death in the eye Lyrics inside that make strong men cry Bits of paper and rhyme Find the time Let our anguish find the words To be free Suddenly please...bleed for me Now that you've done All that you can Mr.Blues player, singer, Poet writer man, Combine the three And let me see Just this one last request Please, please...conquer our quest Die for me...feel me bleed Copyright © 2002 Dennis Hicks |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Whew! I believe I actually did feel you bleed!... Warm hugs, EA |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
Wow! Wow! |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Really nicely done. Enjoyed the read. |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Very nice and emotoional. Joyce |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wow!! Very good..get's my vote! ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Yeah, strum that whammy-bar and keep up them 12-bar rhythms, bluesman, this is excellent, I love this, this has my bluesy vote, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Dennis, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton  "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (03-17-2003 07:43 PM).] |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Very, very good, Dennis.....  "Love makes the world go around" |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
When you start talking about the blues, you get my attention. *G* And I'm glad you did... this is a powerful read. *S* |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
I enjoyed this.....  ''player play for me....singer sing for me....''  Lauren~I close my eyes and there in the shadows I see your light |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
yes...a worthy piece indeed. nocely done Dennis |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
we all listen to music for different reasons. You've just shown here that many times, it's for emotional benefits. This was great! Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
Dennis, VERY cool piece! When you think you have heard it all, |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
I think that you've captured the anguish of the Blues so very well here. I swore that I heard the saxophone wailing out my name in the background as I read. Good job. -Bob |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
 Just in here |
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Street Heart Member
since 2002-09-05
Posts 349Pennsylvania,USA |
Cool poem,Dennis.Eloquent angst.I like your phrasing and emotion in this...an ode to expression.Vote! Peace On Earth,Geoffrey If a man has not discovered something he is willing to die for,his life is not worth living. |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
Very nice, Ben Harper came to mine.My vote. Jason |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
I felt it... Susan |
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Poet4Christ Member
since 2003-02-19
Posts 211Oklahoma City |
Dennis, I love the blues. You have captured the emotion we all have, searching for those creative voices that will reach in and drive us. I am learning so much about poetry from all of the great poets here. Thank you for this great slice of education. I enjoy all poetry and it is hard not to vote for most, but I try to be professional. I must say you deserve this vote. God bless you. Thanx - Tim He that trusteth in his own heart is a fool: but whoso walketh wisely, he shall be delivered. Proverbs 28:26 |
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