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~DreamChild~
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in your dreams

0 posted 2003-01-01 06:26 PM



I thought I'd make a rhyme
with my lyrics sublime
if I had a microphone
I'd let you HEAR me chime

so i guess i'll just type it
even though i don't like it
for the size of my skills
this page is quite a tight fit

guess you could say i'm a poet
i can flow and i know it
i'm white it's alright
my hypes tight
so let me show it

this ain't no pre-written sonnet
straight up spit supersonic
terms that i learned and discerned
while smokin chronic


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Nan
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Cape Cod Massachusetts USA
1 posted 2003-01-01 10:36 PM


FreeFlowin' Rap - is still poetry, DreamChild...

Midnitesun
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Gaia
2 posted 2003-01-02 04:11 PM


LOL, an enjoyable free flow.
Salty
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since 2002-11-23
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Texas
3 posted 2003-01-02 05:04 PM


I believe you are showing it...and I'm enjoying it.
Salty

In the Midst of movement and chaos, keep stillness inside of you.
--Deepak Chop

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