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rm711 Member
since 2002-11-30
Posts 131Wiltshire, England 
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The frozen tears Of a guardian angel Icy droplets Falling from somewhere above Catch them in your hand And watch them melt away Each one so different But also so the same Pouring down from the sky Growing thicker by the minute Masking the world In a cover of white mystery And when it melts away It reveals to you The things you forgot The trees, the grass The world is back with you again The way it’s always been "Some men see things as they are and say why? I dream things that never were and say why not?" |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Yes Rose, the seasons of life, the cycles go on and life is restored. Very well done. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
pretty snow poem, falling and melting almost at the same time, fragile like love, oh.......snow, dont go |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Ah yes, and as an Alaskan who moved to England, I can say that I enjoyed reading this one!! You show the beauty, and delicate workings of that white stuff....but I'm also glad that I now live where the snow doesn't fall for 6 months at a time, and I don't have to shovel it!!!! Loved this, and by the way.....we, in England, have a new forecast for snow......maybe on New Years Day!! Today is a new beginning!!! |
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FLOWERGIRL Junior Member
since 2003-01-04
Posts 40the woods of Pa |
as i read your lovely poem about snow i must tell you that it is snowing this very moment outside my window - how it all brings a warm smile and good memories to me - thank you This is only one moment in time so don't forget to look at the big picture and life is short stop and enjoy the senery every couple of miles :>) |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
This is a pretty poem. I like to read about snow and see it in pictures. We hardly ever see any here in Florida...  "Love makes the world go around" |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
God! I loved the ending! Just beautiful! |
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