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Open Poetry #24

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Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

0 posted 2002-12-30 04:45 PM

I scrape my fingers
across these walls
in hopes of raising
warmer memories
then those that fill
this tired head
These rooms
remain unchanged,
ancient ruins
in silent testament
to a lost civilization
that rarely comes to visit
There are images
that haunt
this rubble
Vacant eyes
Teeth bared in
seeming smiles
but closer inspection
and reflection
reveal they're
clenched
You really can
never go home again
And I can
finally say honestly
That I wouldn't have
it any other way

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2002-12-30 04:47 PM

No raph... one can never go back to how it was, only make how it is the best they can..

nice ending on this... I enjoyed

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2002-12-30 04:50 PM

You really can
never go home again
And I can
finally say honestly
That I wouldn't have
it any other way

Me, either.

Very good...thank you.

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

3 posted 2002-12-30 06:56 PM

this is sad,
i dont know what else to say,but that

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

4 posted 2002-12-30 06:59 PM

Cpat thank you ver much, it's a lesson one has to learn

Thank you sunshine, i know i'm better for it

Inked i guess it can be considered a little sad, but like i said i'm better for it, i don't think i would've had the growth that I've had on my own

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