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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2002-12-29 07:45 PM


A Choice of Something

The way she treats me is not the
way I like to be treated.
But she said meet my demands
or have "nothing".
If I give into her demands
I am doomed to a boring life
of "better than nothing".
When it comes to relationships
more choices should be offer than
"better than nothing" or "nothing".
Choices should always include
a choice of "Something".

JamesLee
December28
2002

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Magnus
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1 posted 2002-12-29 08:33 PM


You have got that right!!!

Very wise words James...

garysgirl
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2 posted 2002-12-29 08:59 PM


YES,  James........

you deserve  SOMETHING....
not  NOTHING.......

     

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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3 posted 2002-12-29 10:38 PM


Hey James, I have to agree. There should be more choices.
Peace in the New Year
Sandra

Salty
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4 posted 2002-12-30 12:59 PM


You might just keep looking.....ultimatums such as these don't sound too promising.

There will be someome willing to give something somewhere. *S*


~Salty

In the Midst of movement and chaos, keep stillness inside of you.
--Deepak Chop

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5 posted 2002-12-30 02:24 AM


how 'bout "something else altogether"?
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