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RebelFolk Junior Member
since 2002-12-27
Posts 15Nashville, TN |
Does it really matter How deep the river flows How high the mountains rise above the sea If time were just a razor's edge Frozen into ryme I'd still feel you lying next to me I still see you in the morning Before I open my eyes I hold you in the silence of my storm Was it really yesterday Or was it just a dream Coming back to break the light of dawn I can still remember How I learned to smile Every time you chased away the rain I put on my masquerade If only for a while With nothing left to loose its all the same So here we are Right where we were again Just two lost sailors Searching for the wind I'll write my love stories and pretend What goes around won't come around again |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Enjoyed this interesting write. Chris  "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Excellent metaphor...nice rhythm ThisDiamond |
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neveah5 Member
since 2002-11-22
Posts 197Ohio |
somehow, this came off as peaceful to me but so sad too..strange combination i guess. i'm probably way off. truly liked it though  |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I liked this. At first I thought you were kind of putting down poetry, for some reason. But then it seemed that you were trying to talk serious with more reality instead of fantasy.......  Knowing me, I've probably got your ideas all wrong?  "Love makes the world go around" |
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