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bklynboy
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since 2002-12-15
Posts 660
florida

0 posted 2002-12-28 06:27 PM


The moon rises and so do I
Sleeping together, but yet alone.

The reach for comfort,
but no one is there.

Passion unbridled,
but denied.

A single kiss
and a lonely good night.

Lying awake
waiting for the dawn.

Hoping the hours move quickly
only to find only 5 minutes have passed.

Comfort to find,
to share for a few hours.

Happiness at last,
if only briefly felt.

© Copyright 2002 bklynboy - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2002-12-28 06:31 PM


Bklynboy, Welcome to Passions!  I hope you look around and find this to be the Poet's home you've been looking for!  Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound

GG
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since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532
Lost in thought
2 posted 2002-12-28 08:09 PM


Hey there! welcome to the blue Pages
great first post and hope to see you around a lot more!
Enjoy

Always, Alyssa


- And so it was that time stood still -

garysgirl
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since 2002-09-29
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3 posted 2002-12-28 08:15 PM


Hello,
Welcome to Passions In Poetry. I hope you like it here.
I liked your poem and hope to read more.
Thank you for sharing.  

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (12-28-2002 08:21 PM).]

inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19
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Ohio
4 posted 2002-12-28 08:57 PM


i hear  you, loud and clear,
what part of bklyn?

passing shadows
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displaced
5 posted 2002-12-29 03:04 AM


Welcome!

I enjoyed this write, and can relate. Sad and lonely.

Mistletoe Angel
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6 posted 2002-12-29 04:43 AM




(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is soooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, I LOVE IT!!! This is a beautiful debut glimmering with love, sweet friend, yay! Welcome to Passions, sweet friend, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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