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dhicks03
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since 2002-12-26

Posts 267
Missouri,USA

0 posted 2002-12-28 03:06 AM

Blues player...play for me

Bend those strings
Un-spoken words
That only chosen
Knowing ones
Can hear...feel me bleed

Poet...write for me

Let the dead weight of heartache
Pour out onto the paper
As your sorrows
Of forgotten tomorrow's
Pours into ink...feel me bleed

Singer...sing for me

Look life and death in the eye
Lyrics inside that make strong men cry
Bits of paper and rhyme
Find the time
Let our anguish find the words
To be free
Suddenly please...bleed for me

Now that you've done
All that you can
Mr.Blues player, singer,
Poet writer man,
Combine the three
And let me see
Just this one last request
Please, please...conquer our quest

Die for me...feel me bleed

Copyright © 2002 Dennis Hicks

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

1 posted 2002-12-28 04:45 AM

heart-breaking, indeed

Nan

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since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

2 posted 2002-12-29 08:12 AM

Singing the Blues... Well done, Dennis..

Poet deVine

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Hurricane Alley

3 posted 2002-12-29 11:20 AM

I hope you don't think this is trite, but there is a lot of soul in your work. I enjoyed this very much!

zenny
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since 2002-11-24

Posts 371
Belgium

4 posted 2002-12-29 11:22 AM

a very touching piece of work

well done

The greatest thing u'll ever learn
is just to love
and be loved
in return

*hugs* Kelly.

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

5 posted 2002-12-29 11:33 AM

Poet...write for me.

Yes!

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

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Tamarac Fla

6 posted 2002-12-29 11:50 AM

dhicks03
A very good write, enjoyed.

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

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California

7 posted 2002-12-29 11:56 AM

Dennis

Thoughtfilled and intense....enjoyed!

dhicks03
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since 2002-12-26

Posts 267
Missouri,USA

8 posted 2002-12-29 05:46 PM

Wow, Thank you ALL so much for your warm comments. I appreciate each and every one of them!

Rainbowdust
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since 2002-12-05

Posts 320
Sydney, Australia

9 posted 2003-01-03 12:19 PM

Beautiful and soul stirring, my friend.

The soul would have no rainbows, had the eyes no tears.

regards2you
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since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

10 posted 2003-01-03 01:34 AM

Sooooooo good!!!

Enjoyed, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

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