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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2002-12-27 06:12 PM

Another chapter turns another candle burns
For what cannot be changed another path arranged
From what cannot give up and what will never rest
Another plunge to take and what recovered blessed

The cycles of the body within the cycles of a life
For what is best humanity and all that braves the knife
From what cannot be taken down and what will never fly
In single destination soars the spirit, mind and sky

Physical dimensions watched so closely to stay strong
The spirit covets forces great to bolster far and long
To shine into the morning another sun conforming
In merge to take a reverent shine among the ones in heaven's trine

Copyright Kkh 12/27/02

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2002-12-27 06:20 PM

From what cannot be taken down and what will never fly
In single destination soars the spirit, mind and sky

Your thoughts are spectacular in their own write~ and truly a wonder to behold.

I wish you a very Happy New year TD~

Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

2 posted 2002-12-27 06:26 PM

Beautiful

I'm dangerous when left alone hehehe
*sniff* I've never been abducted by aliens...
I admit it... I like thinking about guys

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

3 posted 2002-12-27 07:27 PM

There ya go again...reaching for the F and
W...AGAIN!!!!!

Nicely done K. Soft, tender and humbling.

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

4 posted 2002-12-27 07:39 PM

Spectacular!
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

5 posted 2002-12-27 08:12 PM

Ah, my friend, 'tis not only heavens trine that is wonderful and beautiful, but the poetic trine you've shared with us, too.

jwesley

[This message has been edited by jwesley (12-27-2002 08:12 PM).]

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2002-12-27 08:17 PM

Oh Kathleen..I do believe this is my favourite from you now.
~Hugs~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

GG
Member Elite

since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

7 posted 2002-12-27 08:23 PM

Great rhythym, and wonderful words and meaning, I like this piece a lot, good job

A good new year to you!
keep writing.
Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

8 posted 2002-12-27 08:34 PM

TD

You already know I think you are a wonderful poet, (don't you?)...this is just another example of why.

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