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dhicks03
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since 2002-12-26
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0 posted 2002-12-27 01:29 AM



Feel this way,
the magic
the moment,
hearts and breath
two into one,
ensconced into moments
of prism whispers,
sweet sweat
beading upon brow.
Eyes radiate
gentle caresses,
placed upon enchanted touch.
Lay claim to a virtuoso,
spirits sing throughout
as never heard before,
together
united
love becomes
a simple picture...of us.



© Copyright 2002 Dennis Hicks - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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1 posted 2002-12-27 01:31 AM


I'd love to feel that way, yes. An expressive write, I love it.
vlraynes
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2 posted 2002-12-28 02:36 AM



Dennis~
This is such a lovely write.
I very much enjoyed reading it.
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

dhicks03
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since 2002-12-26
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3 posted 2002-12-28 02:38 AM


Thank you both for your warm words.I appreciate the comments
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4 posted 2002-12-28 08:38 AM


Dennis, this is very beautiful. You certainly do know how to write poetry, Sir. Thank you for sharing with us.  

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

CSKpoet
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since 2002-07-12
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5 posted 2002-12-28 08:49 AM


Exquisite, dear poet
smooth as silk and softly senuous

aloha, Cher

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

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