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zenny
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0 posted 2002-12-26 09:33 AM


A chear, a sigh, a sign of live
twirls through my veins
A hope for this mystery to clear
though leaving on my soul, eternal stains

A ray of hope enlights my mind
now happy news came to my ear
Hope is growing, anger is brewing
though hoping is to fear

'Cause shattered hopes define my past
I fear this revived green sign
For future may torment it
and hurt these feelings of mine

Taking it as it comes
is what i try to achieve
though fear and stress and fighting nerves
are making me want to give up.. and leave

The greatest thing u'll ever learn
is just to love
and be loved
in return

*hugs* Kelly.

© Copyright 2002 Kelly Verbeeck - All Rights Reserved
Midnitesun
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1 posted 2002-12-26 10:20 AM


Hang in there, there are many shades of green, and maybe one will be the perfect hue  for you. Visit us often, please. Do you have any descriptive poems about the area you live in, scenic poetry or????
zenny
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2 posted 2002-12-26 12:29 PM


Midnightsun, thanks for your kind words
To answer your question, all my poems are at http://geocities.com/zennypoetry ; feel free to read them there

The greatest thing u'll ever learn
is just to love
and be loved
in return

*hugs* Kelly.

zenny
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since 2002-11-24
Posts 371
Belgium
3 posted 2002-12-26 12:29 PM


Midnightsun, thanks for your kind words
To answer your question, all my poems are at http://geocities.com/zennypoetry ; feel free to read them there

The greatest thing u'll ever learn
is just to love
and be loved
in return

*hugs* Kelly.

Midnitesun
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Gaia
4 posted 2002-12-26 12:42 PM


The Inner Mirror...Zenny, that one really grabs my heart. The inner child and the outer adult of you always live within the same body, they never really do separate, do they?
zenny
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5 posted 2002-12-26 01:21 PM


You are right there midnightsun
Thanks again for your replies and interest in my writings

The greatest thing u'll ever learn
is just to love
and be loved
in return

*hugs* Kelly.

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