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poetryoftheheart
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0 posted 2002-12-25 09:48 PM


In the wind
The leaves rustle
The grass blows
And I find myself falling in love
With a feeling
With a memory
With you all over again

As the stars shine I stand staring at the moon
The beauty of God’s nature
The works of his hands
The gifts he has given
The things I know
The beautiful world we call home

Snug by a fire
Flames flicker in the dark
Feeling so cozy
Feeling so warm
Lost in thoughts
Of a love so pure
It could only be you

Under the sky
The clouds overhead
Float by gracefully
Like large cotton beds
I bow my head to give thanks to God
For the one I love
Because he gave me to you

If you like this poem and would like to see more, visit Poetry of the Heart at chava_bonita.tripod.com



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Sunshine
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1 posted 2002-12-25 10:29 PM


Welcome to Passions!  I am so glad to be one of the first to welcome you; and please, Check your E-mail for a Special Message!

Karilea
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I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound

babes684
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2 posted 2002-12-25 10:45 PM


Hello :happy:

sup? nothing much here:D

:celebrate:WELCOME:celebrate:

i really really enjoyed this poem :wave:
it twas really different which is a good thing keep writing:butterfly:


:loveya:
¤Ang¤

MUCH LOVE N POET RESPECT

Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2002-12-26 12:00 PM




(smiles) Yay! This is suchn a wonderfully beautiful debut, sweet friend, may God always bless your heart with loves true peace, yay, I LOVE IT!!! Welcome to Passions, sweet friend, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Magicmystery
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4 posted 2002-12-26 01:36 AM


Poetryoftheheart.  Cool name.... I won't ask you how you came by it.  I know... I absolutely loved this piece. I was floating on the wind for a moment there.  Everything about your poem speaks to me of such etherial peace... of BEING... IN LOve. And I especially liked the part where you gave thanks for being with the one you love.  I have a similar story. I will be sure to visit your site and I hope I see you in here more also.  This is a wonderful place to make friends.


Sherry Gardner

Cherish the good memories of the past and look forward to the adventure called Tomorrow. But above all... be kind to yourself today.

passing shadows
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5 posted 2002-12-26 01:59 AM


beautiful! I appreciate this one much.
EagleOne
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6 posted 2002-12-26 04:03 AM


Nicely done, welcome!

I don't know where I'm running now, I'm just running on... ~ Jackson Browne

Sunkissed
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7 posted 2002-12-26 05:35 AM


Beautiful!  Welcome to Passions.


Sunkissed.

Sandpiper
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8 posted 2002-12-26 08:19 AM


a lovely, cozy read--enjoyed and welcome!

"And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul."
Pablo Neruda

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9 posted 2002-12-26 11:24 AM


Absolutely beautiful way to enter this site!
Welcome, and hope that you stay around, enjoy the comraderie within these pages.

ThisDiamond
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10 posted 2002-12-26 11:47 AM


Spectacular entrance...welcome to Passions!
Look forward to reading you.
ThisDiamond

kitkat
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11 posted 2002-12-27 01:03 AM


Lovely poem
Welcome to passions

Life is a story waiting to happen..Go on.... Create, Live and Love

vlraynes
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12 posted 2002-12-28 02:17 AM



poetryoftheheart~
This is a lovely write and a wonderful first post.
Welcome to Passions.  I hope to see lots more from you.
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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