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GOlDsparklESS
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0 posted 2002-12-24 01:07 PM


There are endless ways to praise
God’s abounding roar.I’ll jump
into the ocean first.
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*
When the soul lies down in the sand,
The world is too full to talk about.
Just hold me.
cry, weeping speech into the sea.
The breeze has secrets to tell you.
I would love to kiss you.
In the body of the world, they say,
There is a soul and you are that.
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But we have ways within each other
that will never be said by anyone.
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Day and night fumble
gracefully towards each other; Melody,
a quiet, bright
song.If it fades,
We fade.
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There’s frenzy in my head,
Pirouetting to the rhythm of an unseen
soul, like flocks of undulating doves.


© Copyright 2002 Manisha Narang - All Rights Reserved
Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2002-12-24 01:15 PM


Very nice, enjoyed the frenzy, the pirouette. Yes, there is a multitude of ways to praise, and to enjoy the thoughts that tumble from another POV.
EagleScorpion
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2 posted 2003-01-02 11:58 AM


::Bump!::

you never cease to dig as far as you can go. so spiritual. so discerning.

passing shadows
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3 posted 2003-01-02 12:30 PM


wow! this is deep! very!
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