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Paul Wilson
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0 posted 2002-12-24 05:31 AM


God’s Christmas Tree
By: Paul Wilson


There among the stars and clouds
Beyond sight of mortal man
This tree embraced by the crowds
Softly the music began

Angels singing in harmony
They all came to see God’s tree
Pictures on each limb for all to see
People of all ages adorn Gods tree

Voices raised in sweet refrain
Joyous times in God’s domain
Angels gather round God’s tree
There sits God with babe on knee

Mother Mary on top you see
Adorning highest limb on God’s tree
A Special place for all those saved
Their road to salvation Jesus paved

There sits Jesus by fathers side
No scars from cross to hide
A golden halo now replaces thorns
For lost souls he forever mourns

Angels gathered round the tree
Watching pictures come to life you see
God stood up and wings were given
To all that died for now they are living

Forever Angels fly you see
From God’s Christmas tree


~~~



" To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you "

[This message has been edited by Paul Wilson (12-24-2002 10:07 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-12-24 05:36 AM


a wonderful thought
and a beautiful write!

A happy celebration of His Bithday to you

Always, Alyssa

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2 posted 2002-12-24 05:36 AM


smile..

lovely presentation

and I see you are studying meter...

it SHOWS, m'friend, it shows.

and a very Happy Christmas to you too.
You seem to have the spirit, lovie!




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3 posted 2002-12-24 05:44 AM


Beautiful Paul!  
Merry Christmas and may love fill your home and heart!

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4 posted 2002-12-24 06:00 AM


GG~ Thanks for the kind reply.
May you have a happy holiday as well...Paul


To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you "


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5 posted 2002-12-24 06:09 AM


Serenity~ Thanks for taking time to read.
Meter...I didn't know I was studying it, really...If I have any meter in here it is by accident I assure you, but feel free to help.

I would like someone as yourself or Balladeer or any knowlegeable person to check out another post "Starting Over" and really let me know what you think about. That's the one I was asking the question about in Q&A last night.

Thanks for your kind words and for your friendship these past few months. May you enjoy your holidays dear friend...Paul

  

To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you "

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6 posted 2002-12-24 06:12 AM


Donna~ Thank you dear lady for your sweet words.
May you and you family have a blessed & Merry Christmas...Paul  

<font size=4>" To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you "

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7 posted 2002-12-24 07:14 AM


What a lovely visual Paul ... thank you for the warmth and depth this brings to the meaning of Christmas ...

Merry Christmas to you!

Best wishes,
/Kit

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8 posted 2002-12-24 08:55 AM


Hello friend...  
I'm always glad to see your wonderful poetry. This is absolutely beautiful. Into my library it goes.  


Merry Christmas to you and yours, Paul...  

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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Kit~ Thank you dear lady for a moment of your time this busy season. May the true spirit of Christmas keep you warm and blessed...Paul

Merry Christmas to you & yours.

To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you "

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10 posted 2002-12-24 07:10 PM


Ethel~ You are a shining star to these pages of blue. May the joy of the season forever remain in your heart. Thanks for the sweet reply. Have a Merry Christmas...Paul

To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you "

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(big hugggssssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, justn envisioning Mary holding the baby close to her heart and the Magi singing praise choruses to Him made me cry reading this, this is so gorgeous and angelic! (smiles) God Bless You and your family, sweet friend, yay, MERRY CHRISTMAS!!!



May love and light always shine upon you!



Love,
Noah Eaton

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Shakira

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12 posted 2002-12-25 08:00 PM


They live indeed, upon God's Tree - Lovely words, Paul - Merry Christmas to you and yours...
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13 posted 2003-01-01 07:38 PM


Noah...Thanks for reading and for your sweet words...Paul

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14 posted 2003-01-01 07:39 PM


Nan~ Thank you dear lady for your kind words & for taking time from your busy life to read
and reply...Paul

"To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you"

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