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0 posted 2002-12-22 05:05 PM


The taste of your lips
sweet, sensuous kiss
I so dearly miss

The feel of your touch
so tenderly caressing me
such pleasure to be

The sound of your voice
with deep love heard
in every single word

The scent of you
so completely masculine
I inhale the smell of your skin

The sight of your body
powerful, muscular, strong
my eyes see nothing wrong

The love of you
passionate, loving, caring
our hearts with each other, sharing

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1 posted 2002-12-22 05:16 PM


'... The love of you
passionate, loving, caring
our hearts with each other, sharing ...'

Beautifully written line. Seems your missing your Gary a whole big bunch. Hope you'll be together for Christmas.

Hugs, Marti

Let our love circle the world and
bring Peace to all this Holiday Season.

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2 posted 2002-12-22 06:15 PM


Ethel - oh, the longing in this poem...I can feel it. Lovely. Chris

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that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

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3 posted 2002-12-22 06:42 PM


this stirred the imagination, very well done garysgirl.......he should read it, I imagine. *Smile*
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4 posted 2002-12-22 06:46 PM


garysgirl - I have no words to say about how tender and lovely this write is....

BC

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5 posted 2002-12-22 07:58 PM


Ahhh this is so sweet and tender....
Beautiful piece Ethel...
I do hope you and Gary will be together for Christmas.
~Hugs~

~ Season's Greetings to my 'family' at Passions ~

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6 posted 2002-12-22 08:41 PM


You write of love and longing with such passion Ethel.  Much enjoyed these tender thoughts of yours.
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7 posted 2002-12-22 08:43 PM


very sweet sentiments expressed in a loving way
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8 posted 2002-12-22 08:48 PM



Ethel,


Wonderful. I'm sure you will be together with him for holidays.
Enjoy! May your love touch all
around you this season as it does
all of us here, as you share
your poetry.

Hugs and love, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

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9 posted 2002-12-22 09:03 PM




(sigh) Oh Ethel, this is soooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, this made me cry as I thought of my Joanna reading this and how she is that special person who makes me feel this way! (kiss on cheek) I wish you and Gary to be happy together this Christmas, sweet friend, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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10 posted 2002-12-22 09:06 PM


Ethel..I hope Santa reads this poem..he'll have no problem figuring out what to bring you for Christmas...

believe in what your heart feels...

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11 posted 2002-12-23 02:50 AM


reminds me of the Chicago song "You Come To My Senses"
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12 posted 2002-12-23 03:55 AM


lovely words Ethel
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13 posted 2003-01-06 05:00 PM


Marti,
thank you for your sweet words.
I'm glad you enjoyed the poem.....

Chris,
Yes, I was wanting to see him really bad when I wrote this. Thanks for reading...

tone of voice,
Thanks for your reply. Yes, he will
read it.  

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  


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Bill,
Thank you for reading and replying.
I appreciate your thinking that it's
tender and lovely.  

Nancy Lee,
Thank you for liking it and for your
well wishes for me and Gary.....

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (01-06-2003 05:06 PM).]

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15 posted 2003-01-06 05:08 PM


Lori,
Thank you for reading and replying.
I'm glad that you enjoyed it....

Inkedgoddess,
Thanks for reading. I'm glad that you
enjoyed it....

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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16 posted 2003-01-06 05:11 PM


Pat,
I'm really glad that you liked it.
Thanks for your well wishes.....
Noah,
Thank you again for knowing just what
to say.......

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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17 posted 2003-01-06 05:16 PM


Scorpio,
You're right, Santa knows exactly
what(who) I want for Christmas.....

Dixie,
I really love that group, too. Thanks for
replying...

Raph,
Thank you. I appreciate that.......

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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