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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-12-16 10:53 AM



Reflections

you
are the definition
of all
I feel
a dream
I once had
but your face
is real
I look
in your eyes
seeing
a reflection
of what will be
one mirroring
the other
is what I see
a deeper place
of you
that only
I can go
secrets you keep
from the world
but to me
you show
reflected images
tender
for another
to share
breath
left on glass
from the heat
of stirred up air


© Copyright 2002 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-12-16 12:17 PM


reflected images
tender
for another
to share
breath
left on glass
from the heat
of stirred up air

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Absolutely stunningly beautiful imagery.

Salty
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2 posted 2002-12-16 12:47 PM


WOW!!!!  this is so lovely.  The breath left on glass....VERY CAPTURING WORDS.


Love the read!

~Salty

In the Midst of movement and chaos, keep stillness inside of you.
--Deepak Chop

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3 posted 2002-12-16 01:28 PM


yep,  you said it, what I couldn't get down to paper.
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4 posted 2002-12-22 03:27 PM




(smiles) And I believe love has the ability to reflect those secrets, as we feel we can tell our love anything in the world and so the secrets are no longer concealed! (kiss on cheek) This is magically delightful, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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5 posted 2002-12-23 02:39 AM


Helen~ Enjoyed very much. Reflections of you heart. Thanks for sharing...Paul

" To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you "

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6 posted 2002-12-23 02:43 AM


I'm glad this one came back around again...good to read it once more
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