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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2002-12-22 07:48 AM


A magic Lie

I’ve found a magic field of lie
Under a tree that looks like why
Few branches holding many leaves
And most are green I do believe.

A tree that grows chaos flowers
With chaos colors holding powers
Within the wet of morning mist
This fantasy blooms with exist

A wile of a dexterous stir
With ecstasy and smell of myrrh
With phantoms that play pursuit
To all the dreams that are its root

And I’ve used this beautiful ply
And dropped my anchor in its lie
It heals for me the wounds of day
In a lovely and abstract way

So if you have a magic lie
Let that flower glorify.


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1 posted 2002-12-22 07:57 AM



I do have that place, my Sy...
and the truth comes in the lie...
where all is as it should then be...
this magic place of mystery.

kayjay
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2 posted 2002-12-22 08:29 AM


This is a fine tribute to fables we hold fast, so that can face another tomorrow.  You always provide a fine read.  KJ

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 2002-12-22 09:39 AM


Sunshine
I knew you did.

kayjay
Thank you and have a good holiday.

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4 posted 2002-12-22 10:39 AM


Seymour - I think..perhaps.....yes!! I know a place like this. Thanks for the morning read - magical once again. hugs, Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

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5 posted 2002-12-22 10:44 AM


Are you sure you are not the Grand Wizard in
Lord of the Rings?  

Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 2002-12-22 10:54 AM


Chris,
Thanks for the magical.

Barry,
Perhaps, perhaps LOL Happy New year.

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7 posted 2002-12-22 12:24 PM


Oh my dear sweet Sey
these are the kind of lies
that are magical in hold
as the mystic world unfolds..

couldn't help myself dear,
your words inspired.
Very well done!

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8 posted 2002-12-22 12:42 PM


Seymour - great read this morning...

BC

Seymour Tabin
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9 posted 2002-12-22 12:58 PM


Gentle Spirit
Thank you so much for the sweet reply.

Bill  
Thanks for the read and reply.

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10 posted 2002-12-22 01:13 PM


Smiling in the magic. Great thoughts here.
TD

Seymour Tabin
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11 posted 2002-12-22 01:37 PM


ThisDiamond
Thank you for the nice comment.

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12 posted 2002-12-22 02:12 PM




(smiles) Oh Seymour, I have the magic, but  can never lie, no way, no how! LOL! (big hugggsssssss) You ain't gonna make me! This is delightful, sweet friend, you are a magician of beauty, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Seymour Tabin
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13 posted 2002-12-22 02:20 PM


Noah,
A bright and cute comment, thank you.

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14 posted 2002-12-23 04:36 AM


wounds...I know
Seymour Tabin
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15 posted 2002-12-23 08:00 AM


passing shadows
Thanks for passing by.

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16 posted 2002-12-23 01:18 PM


seymour, i love getting lost in your words. i always seem to inch closer to the screen when reading your poetry, so i can inhale deeper the meanings and wisdom within your words. either that or i need glasses.
lots of christmas love, gemma xxxxxxxxx

learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love.

Seymour Tabin
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17 posted 2002-12-23 01:26 PM


gemma,
Cute comment, enjoyed. Merry Christmas.

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18 posted 2002-12-23 02:01 PM


I came to see the wizard, the wonderful wizard of words. I'm never dissapointed by these visits, thank you
Seymour Tabin
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19 posted 2002-12-23 02:08 PM


Aenimal
Thank you and a Merry Christmas.

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20 posted 2002-12-23 03:07 PM


Sy, thankfully, I'm able to have afternoon tea with you while the pecan pie is cooking. And what  delight this magic poem brought forth.

Hugs to you, Marti

Let our love circle the world and
bring Peace to all this Holiday Season.

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21 posted 2002-12-23 03:08 PM


Love the way this one lies upon the blue.
Seymour Tabin
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22 posted 2002-12-23 05:26 PM


Marti,
Thank you for that Christmas presant of reply.

Midnitesun
Some lies are forgivable. LOL

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