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Practical Beauty
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Practical Beauty |
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smalls Member
since 2002-12-20
Posts 62 |
Practical Beauty Wrapped tightly in your beauty Everything you wanted to be. Mentioned in long breaths Everything you wanted to hear. Done to perfection Everything you wanted to do. How much you are worth Everything you wanted to realize. Practical Beauty Everything you did not want to be. Whispers of shallow ends Everything you did not want to hear. Leaving your emptiness full Everything you did not want to do. Disturbed by these words Everything you did not want to realize. My poetry online http://www.geocities.com/mrlarrysmalls/ [This message has been edited by smalls (12-21-2002 08:19 PM).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
"Leaving your emptiness full Everything you did not want to do. Disturbed by these words Everything you did not want to realize." I think you just said it all. |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
 Somehow I knew the second one I read would be even better than the first one. I love the message you convey and the way in which you do it. Song material, I think. ~~I Love You~~ |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Imperfection doesn't look half bad when reading it this way. Nice and so practical really~ Welcome smalls |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Very, very nice. One to reread, again. |
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Sunkissed Senior Member
since 2002-12-03
Posts 610 |
Well said. sunkissed. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
no one is perfect...not even in beauty. |
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