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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-12-21 11:09 AM

A Needed Want

there is one
who knows my needs
on which
my want feeds
each and every step
to my dance
intricate art
of romance
whose gentle strength
touches so tender
making an ordinary life
change to splendor
tenderly holds
the only key
to the secrets
that unlocks me
labyrinthly lost
in this touch
forever to need you
so much

“life is not about breathing moments, it is about moments that leave you breathless.” author unknown
It is like looking for a blizzard in a glass sno

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2002-12-21 11:23 AM

"tenderly holds
the only key
to the secrets
that unlocks me
labyrinthly lost
in this touch
forever to need you
so much"

ok, well, I could have just copied and pasted the whole poem, it's wonderful!

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

2 posted 2002-12-21 11:27 AM

helen - tender is the write of your words...

BC

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

3 posted 2002-12-21 11:33 AM

Candles burn hot and slowly give away to
the gravity of wax.... Your candle burns
most bright in the slow warmth of passion.

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

4 posted 2002-12-21 12:45 PM

enjoyed

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2002-12-21 02:03 PM

there is one...

a beautiful write, as always

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2002-12-21 05:01 PM

(sigh) This is so lovely, sweet friend, I wish for true loves passion to always shine in you and fulfill your needs and wants! (kiss on cheek) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Krawdad
Member Elite

since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

7 posted 2002-12-24 12:53 PM

"click"

I think I like this the best:

"each and every step
to my dance
intricate art
of romance"

bslicker

Member Elite

since 2000-12-04

Posts 2321
state of mind

8 posted 2002-12-24 11:14 AM

And I am listening

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

9 posted 2002-12-24 11:28 AM

1slick_lady
Good write, good read and I wish your deed of need. Merry Christmas.

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