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Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

0 posted 2002-12-20 11:39 PM

I lay fetal
Ripped flesh
and bare bone
licking my
heart clean
Poisoned
wounds
that
run deep
Serrated ideals
that pierce
flesh
and bleed
soul

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2002-12-20 11:56 PM

in comparison? smile.

Tonight I'm just a bit disillusioned.

But oh you write the pain of it well.

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

2 posted 2002-12-21 01:11 AM

But, you see clearly, the onrush of blade.

Ed

ecrivan
Member Elite

since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

3 posted 2002-12-21 02:53 AM

A sharp write...some cutting imagery

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

4 posted 2002-12-21 03:47 AM

Thanks Karen it's a painful subject for me having been raised one way and then realizing the horrible truth..

Ed even after all these years it can still hurt..muscle memory perhaps?

Merci beaucoup ecrivan

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

5 posted 2002-12-21 08:27 AM

you got to the very core.....finished yourself off, quite nicely........but ouch....im feeling it over here too......
try to find some sunshine and little rabbits today..(dont you hate that when people tell u that.....sometimes it does work tho, if you look enuf)

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

6 posted 2002-12-21 09:20 AM

Aenimal yes indeed, you write of it well...

BC

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

7 posted 2002-12-21 09:29 AM

horrifically wonderful. if you could see the picture you created in my head, you'd be scared! painful, to say the least, you're words once again, took form, and became alive to me. very well written Raph.
lots of love, gemma xxxxxxxx

learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love.

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

8 posted 2002-12-21 11:01 AM

So stop skinning yourself and go hop about, have some fun.

A good write, Raph. But you've left some dried blood on my canvass, so you'll have to go get a big sponge and wipe it up so we have a clean canvass for the new year.

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

9 posted 2002-12-21 02:03 PM

inked I warned you it would be a little darker, i'm not too bad just waiting for the year to close out

Bill thank you very much i appreciate the compliment

Thank you gemma that is a great compliment although I am sorry you had to see it so vividly

kacy I plan to maybe I'll get around to writing from the otherside once and awhile

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

10 posted 2002-12-21 03:07 PM

ouch!

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

11 posted 2002-12-21 03:41 PM

OK, you can sheath the blade now....wipe off
the blood and heal....searingly painful
write in few but powerful words..

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

12 posted 2002-12-21 03:45 PM

Aenimal
Well you know the old saying, "sticks and stone may break my bones, but, enjoyed

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

13 posted 2002-12-21 03:54 PM

Thanks passing for reading

Yup Magnus that's my M.O. Thank you kindly I really appreciate the kind words.

Thanks Seymour glad you enjoyed it

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