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Joyce Johnson
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0 posted 2003-02-13 02:15 PM


Expectation

sase
address
stamp
post
wait
wait
wait
wait
return
anticipation
rejection
dejection

Joyce 02/13/03

[This message has been edited by Joyce Johnson (02-14-2003 10:11 AM).]

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Bill Charles
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1 posted 2003-02-13 02:19 PM


Joyce - yup, sometimes it's like that...

BC

GG
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2 posted 2003-02-13 04:20 PM


guess thats why we shouldn't give our hopes up.
But then, that anticipation is funny, you go through the "definitely" to the "theres no way." But we all do it! over and over again.

Made me think, enjoyed.
Always. Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

BloomingRose
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3 posted 2003-02-13 07:07 PM


It does happen that way sometimes, and it is NOT fun.
Few words expressed well my friend.

Deb

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4 posted 2003-02-14 03:36 AM


nice honest write...it happens sometimes...you seem to take it well
sellout007
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5 posted 2003-02-14 03:47 AM


Never seen a feeling/situation expressed so well in such few words. Kudos to you.


vlraynes
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6 posted 2003-02-14 06:06 AM



Well said, Joyce.
Hugs to you, friend,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

Joyce Johnson
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7 posted 2003-02-14 10:14 AM


But that one acceptance one in a while makes it all worthwhile. Thanks folks. Joyce
Earth Angel
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8 posted 2003-02-14 10:34 AM


Ain't that the truth!?! But perseverance pays off--and when it does, it is very rewarding. Dr. Zues's first manuscript was rejected 28 times and Ernest Hemmingway had to self-publish "The Old Man In The Sea" before a publishing house took it on, and the rest is history!

I congratulate you on the recent acceptance of one of your poems in the magazine, "The Christian Guide"!

Warm hugs and valentine wishes,
EA

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