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Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

0 posted 2003-02-13 01:58 PM

The Universe of You

In my massive longing
I send out signals of desire
moving round the source
of my secret vision of delight
as a planet around the sun.
As the wildly dancing waters
of the untamed sea
craving to touch the Moon.
As the howling wind
passionately curving
the sky scraping trees.

Compelled by an innermost,
unknown urge,
I break through the chains
of my matter bound being
and in a sudden explosion
I transform into a prism
dispersing Light
in millions of sparkles
cast with infinite power
into the Universe of You.

A supernova beyond belief
in the act of dying
as a single star
giving birth to
the indescribable event
of merging with All there is,
letting go of all limits
touching and reuniting
in absolute freedom
with the cosmic
extension of the ONE.

Love, Margherita

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

1 posted 2003-02-13 02:00 PM

I really loved the way you penned this one. Your metaphor and imagery are so well done!

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

2 posted 2003-02-13 02:03 PM

Words cannot express how much I enjoyed reading this fine piece of writing. You swept me away with your descriptive writing and imagery. This will have a loving home in my library. Thank you!

Warm hugs,
EA

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

3 posted 2003-02-13 07:06 PM

Beautiful in so many ways.
Love,
Eric

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2003-02-14 12:22 PM

(smiles) Yay!!! Oh my gosh, and you truly are a shooting star of contagious love that always sprinkles such fairy dust to poetry, yay, this is magically uplifting, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Margherita, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2003-02-14 02:43 AM

I think it left me speechless...

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

6 posted 2003-02-14 07:10 AM

Thank you dear ones ..... Happy Valentine's day to all of you.
May all of you experience deep intensity of Love.
Margherita

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

7 posted 2003-02-14 09:37 AM

I enjoyed this very much, Margherita, and look forward to reading more of your work... Please accept my belated WELCOME to Passions! *S*

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

8 posted 2003-02-14 09:45 AM

Margherita
And a Happy Valentine's day to you.

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

9 posted 2003-02-14 12:39 PM

Margherita - a romantic for sure, I like what you write...

BC

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