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Sacrifice
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Sacrifice |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US 
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(1)You never said thank you for everything I gave you Where were you all those years I sacrificed my soul (2)Now I have moved ahead in life lookin' for bigger and better Now I ask what everyone else has What the heck was I thinking (C)I built my life around you You were all I had or wanted Suddenly my whole word collapsed Yeah, you saw to that You got just what you wanted (3)We live and sometimes we learn Once around is never enough You were worth the sacrifice But you weren't worth all I had (C)I built my life aroud you You were all I had or wanted I'm a stronger, better woman now Thank you for all thosee years I realized I had a spirit *It's a song, not a poem...what do y'all think?* KristieSue |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
well if you are looking for bigger and better... I hear Toe has been having a cash flow problem..you two might be able to work out some sort of deal...and I'm sure he isn't going to take all you have and leave you nothing....  |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
you kill me roflolol |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Very lyrical. Eric |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
Enjoyed the poem. cc- CpatHair...nice "pick me up"! Rf |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
thanks y'all :-) |
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