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the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
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0 posted 2003-02-12 09:34 PM


This is about another one of my friends that after 6 months of marriage her husband became verbally abusive and she decided to leave the marriage.
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I loved you so much
But you just used me
You talked me down
You cheated on me
You piece of scum

To think for so long
I lived here with you
Unhappy and unloved
Nothing but you piece of trash
To kick around

Well I refuse
To take this any longer
I deserve better
And you deserve no one

Before any woman sets eyes on you
I will warn them
About all this crap you do
I will tell them my experience
And if after that
Any one wants to be with you
I pray for them

But now you can cry me a river
Because I am gone
There is nothing that can be done
And I am not coming back
You piece of scum

Cold hands means a warm heart

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seven_conscious
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since 2003-01-27
Posts 33

1 posted 2003-02-12 10:23 PM


that's some anger...  feels good to get it out, eh?  
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2 posted 2003-02-12 10:55 PM


Woo-hoo! Remind me never to get you mad at me!!

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ThunderMage
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3 posted 2003-02-13 02:37 AM


Uh... is it even safe to comment? LOL! Another awesome poem, as usual.

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passing shadows
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4 posted 2003-02-13 03:26 AM



winston
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5 posted 2003-02-13 10:31 AM


Admirable.

It's amazing I won. I was running against peace, prosperity, & incumbency.
--G. "DUBYA" BUSH. June 14, 2001. Unaware of rolling TV camera.

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