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ThisDiamond
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0 posted 2003-02-11 10:29 PM



These white out conditions that spur intuitions
By the gust of impair through the chilly night air
Then to waver before on a step to the door
Far beyond the immediate nature to stare

As the thinkers in stir through the westerly blur
In the white fog of winds when all vision rescinds
Could the morn still forgo, as we tremble to know?
In the offing to fasten in passions and pins

In the drifts of a season without one rhyme or reason
To allow that inside a most pleasurable ride
The anew from the center beacons white light to enter
In a whisper sent wind born, would the day seek and hide?

Copyright Kkh 2/11/03

© Copyright 2003 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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1 posted 2003-02-11 10:30 PM


Beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
2 posted 2003-02-11 10:32 PM


Wonderful write Kathleen..
Reads beautifully aloud.
~Hugs~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
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Ohio
3 posted 2003-02-12 09:15 PM


mysterious feel to this, this whimsical white
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just out of reach
4 posted 2003-02-12 09:24 PM


Enjoyed this Kathleen - very nice. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
5 posted 2003-02-12 09:41 PM


ThisDiamond - magnifying write, liked this one...

BC

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By the sea
6 posted 2003-02-13 06:16 PM


I could read your work all day!

The stars will shine when I am gone,
the earth will turn on as before,
the gulls, still race along the shore,
the morning star, still kiss the dawn

Robert Frazier
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7 posted 2003-02-13 06:28 PM


"In a whisper sent wind born..."

Look, I found another jewell!

Rf

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