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pk
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0 posted 2003-02-11 08:12 PM


“Balls said the queen
If I had them I would be king.”

It is meaningless to posses the thought
Maybe you could play the take of the tart.
No, never in the theater, only a beginner
Hope you rise like a staff and fall like Ceasar

Had that spark of a striker and scat like satchmo
Still no bellow from the maestro
Just bow with the curtain
Laugh with the crew
Does it matter if know body knew?

Well credit given is credit due
To simple minded to see the view
Who knew it would go through
Nobody I guess just you.



© Copyright 2003 pk - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2003-02-11 08:21 PM



A heck of a start.  Welcome to Passions!  Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting!

Karilea
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I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound

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2 posted 2003-02-11 08:23 PM


A very nice entrance to Passions.  Welcome to our poetic haven.
Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2003-02-11 08:24 PM




(smiles) Yay!!! Oh, better prepare for the curtain call because you are awaiting a large standing ovation for this fabulous poignant debut, encore, encore, I LOVE IT!!! Welcome to Passions, sweet friend, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by all your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (02-11-2003 08:25 PM).]

GG
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4 posted 2003-02-11 08:56 PM


made me think, enjoyed this.
Welcome to the Blue Pages!
take off your shoes and relax awhile
(unless your feet stink too much)

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

pk
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5 posted 2003-02-11 09:02 PM


Thank you all for the replies it means alot
Enchantress
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6 posted 2003-02-11 10:06 PM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS!
I look forward to seeing more of your work.
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

paladin
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7 posted 2003-02-11 11:26 PM


as Barrymore said tothe young starlet."The entrance is everythig".Welcome to passions.

paladin

....a knight without armor

garysgirl
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8 posted 2003-02-12 01:44 AM




  
I enjoyed reading your first post,
and look forward to reading more of your poetry
WELCOME  TO  PASSIONS

Hugs from
Ethel....garysgirl


[This message has been edited by garysgirl (02-12-2003 01:46 AM).]

passing shadows
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9 posted 2003-02-12 04:25 AM


Welcome to Passions! I enjoyed this first post...looking forward to more
Dark Angel
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10 posted 2003-02-12 06:29 AM


Welcome!
I enjoyed this very much and look forward to reading more of your work.

[This message has been edited by Dark Angel (02-12-2003 06:30 AM).]

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11 posted 2003-02-12 01:52 PM


LOL at this great opening. Welcome to our passionate home. There is a lot of variety here, and I look forward to seeing your spicy posts.

WELCOME!

Robert Frazier
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12 posted 2003-02-12 01:57 PM


Welcome aboard, pk, I know you'll enjoy you're stay!

Rf

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