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Peter J Marcroft
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since 2003-02-02
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York, England

0 posted 2003-02-10 02:40 PM



Silent I lie, hiding from the enemy,
My fallen plane, burning in the night,
I feel their laser sights, hunting for me,
At the sound of a cricket, I flee in silent flight.

You train for this day, knowing that it could happen,
From a flying cowboy, to a fleeing tribesman,
But you shut it out, killing is all you focus on,
Until you fall, and have to survive all you can.

I meander through the forest, beneath the darkness,
A single man, fleeing on his own,
Through this green, and startling wilderness,
Lost, far from home, and all alone.

I tire of this madness hunt, what will become?
I lie tired, ‘what the hell are we fighting for?’
Will the forest become gunfire, and a daring rescue come?
Or will I be left behind, a forgotten casualty of war?

© Copyright 2003 Peter J Marcroft - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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Jacksonville, Florida, USA
1 posted 2003-02-10 02:40 PM


Yes this is a good piece of poetry

Cold hands means a warm heart

Peter J Marcroft
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since 2003-02-02
Posts 265
York, England
2 posted 2003-02-10 02:41 PM


Thank you for the response, glad you liked it
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