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Neeraja
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0 posted 2003-02-09 12:54 PM


This week... my friend Marion ended the friendship we've had for more then 25 years!  


Good memories...
shattered
by the words you used
to end our friendship...
without explaining to me
why everything
we’ve shared for so long
changed
into this
unbelievable
reality...

I don’t know
what hurts the most...
the bruises
on my heart
or the echo
of your last words...



© Copyright 2003 Neeraja Wittebrood - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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1 posted 2003-02-09 12:55 PM


Very good write. I liked it

Cold hands means a warm heart

garysgirl
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2 posted 2003-02-09 01:18 PM


This has got ti hurt bad.
I'm sorry...

Margherita
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3 posted 2003-02-09 01:28 PM


Your pain is felt! Listen in depth and you'll still hear the echoes of love ... can't be cancelled!
Margherita

ThisDiamond
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4 posted 2003-02-09 01:34 PM


I was caught with the reality you shared here...a vivid write my friend. TD
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5 posted 2003-02-09 03:36 PM


How terribly sad. Perhaps those words will be followed with an "I'm sorry, I was wrong" some time in the future. I understand this pain, as I still wait for a hello from a 'lifetime' friend who has chosen to pretend I no longer exist.
GOlDsparklESS
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6 posted 2003-02-09 04:42 PM


the bond of your friendship is unbreakable. i hope that she comes to realize that! stay strong!
Bill Charles
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7 posted 2003-02-09 04:46 PM


Neeraja - sorry to hear of a friendship lost/ People change, yet I ponder why when they are friends...

BC

Denise
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8 posted 2003-02-09 07:32 PM


So very sad. I'm sorry to hear that. (((HUGS)))
passing shadows
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9 posted 2003-02-10 03:01 AM


oh geez... ...I'm so sorry
Mistletoe Angel
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10 posted 2003-02-10 09:26 AM




(big hugggssssssss) Oh Neeraja, we all send angel hugs out to you, I know how it feels and I only hope things can sort out again between you as that is what friends do! (sigh) I send prayers to you, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Neeraja, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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