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Laney
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since 2002-12-18
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0 posted 2002-12-19 10:29 PM


In the eyes of my patients
I know that they know
that this is the final place,
they will hang their clothes.

In the eyes of my patients
I see their last regrets
I see them remembering sins
like booze and cigarettes.

In the eyes of my patients
I see their strong faith
prayers they grimace through pain
strong will on the vows they have made

In the eyes of my patients
they often recognize me
a smile and a strong warm hug
it fills my heart with glee

In the eyes of my patients
I recognize them too
and although I love them dearly
they often make me blue

In they eyes of myself
I have learned, have loved, have lost
for no paycheck big enough
can compensate the heartache it has cost.

© Copyright 2002 Alana - All Rights Reserved
Magnus
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1 posted 2002-12-19 10:36 PM


Alana,  this is a touching write,  of great
feelings and empathy....  Truly,  the
sadness of loss rest heavy on one's heart
each day as you see them fade away...

Yet,  your gift,  that warmth,  is a lifetime
of kindness...

RSWells
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2 posted 2002-12-19 10:41 PM


And no benefit for your patients equal your compassion. Enjoyed
Laney
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3 posted 2002-12-19 11:09 PM


Thank you both for your kind replies...its a very difficult job, and writing about it is my therapy!  thank you again!!

--Alana

Midnitesun
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Gaia
4 posted 2002-12-20 12:55 PM


It's a difficult job, to get to know so many of them, knowing you'll be saying goodbye so many times. It takes great strength and compassion to do this job.
BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
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By the Seaside
5 posted 2002-12-20 01:21 AM


The last verse spoke volumes.

Thank you for these caring words of love that you've penned so sincerely~

I'm so glad you're here~

christian
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since 2002-12-18
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6 posted 2002-12-20 03:13 AM



touching. i take it youre some sort of
doctor, or a nurse, or some sorta of
worker in the medicine.

i agree with serenade, it does speak
volumes. thanks for inviting me into
your thoughts, i enjoyed the stay.

-chris.

J-Carmen
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since 2002-12-16
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7 posted 2002-12-20 04:01 AM


Yes, been there done that, but I just had to feed them.  But so lovely those folks are.  They were the only reason I looked forward to going to work.

yours truly,
jason

I'm not concieted....I'm convinced

Mistletoe Angel
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8 posted 2002-12-20 04:22 AM




(big hugggssssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, it is such a wonderful yet difficult job to performn and I believe with your golden loving heart you can cross over to so many and comfort them and let them know how he and their loved ones are blessed! (sigh) This is wonderful, sweet friend, you are a wonderful person, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Alana, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Sandpiper
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since 2002-06-15
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9 posted 2002-12-20 05:34 AM


A great respect here, for what you do--you've written of it in a most compassionate way--thank you!

"And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul."
Pablo Neruda

SmartChick
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10 posted 2002-12-20 06:58 AM


I felt the same way. I have worked in nursing homes before. It was alwas so heartbreaking when one passed away. To not get attched to anyone was so hard for me not to do.
inkedgoddess
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11 posted 2002-12-20 07:29 AM


its nice to see you are so dedicated, nice love poem to your patients
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