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Eliza
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0 posted 2003-02-05 02:09 PM





Eliza’s Love

Fragrantly flagrant
Musk thoughts in slow motion love
Hurry twilight song



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1 posted 2003-02-05 02:35 PM


Nicely written, Eliza.
As for myself, phew!
I can't tolerate that particular scent.

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with you
2 posted 2003-02-05 03:01 PM


twilight so gently
welcomes the sent of their love
that lingers till dawn


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3 posted 2003-02-05 03:16 PM


Eliza, this is pretty. I like it...

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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4 posted 2003-02-05 04:05 PM


Very beautiful Eliza..
Good to see you posting again.
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

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